The colors work wellare those tathered shoes

holy moses!

no, those are cloud/mist, the best example might be those of a genie from a lamp

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not haduken anymore?

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Hmmm.... It's very good, especially the coloration. But, I must point out that your proportions are a bit... unbalanced. While I'm a firm believer in "Artist's Rights" your choice make this the way you wanted, I simply think that the proportions are a bit skewed in the lower body and in the head. The torso is very well done, but those areas give it and unbalanced feeling. Great work nonetheless!

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Pure Dementia.

Master Blade: has spoken!
Mistress Halo: He speaks too much.

I'M SO CRAZY!! I'M CRAZY GARY OLDMAN!! SO CRAZY!!!
CRAZY LIKE A COCONUT!!

Don't touch it! It only gets bigger

thanks for the kind critique, but can you redline the mistakes for me >_<? so that i can see my mistakes.. because i really can't see it right now

thanks!

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Interesting costume design, and... cute x3 Are her sleeves long enough to cover her hand?

Awww, now you make me wonder to draw her or Marietta *thinking really hard*

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~LuzBalthasaar =PerseBalthasaar ~Serpentear
We are the Balthasaars! *Strange music plays*

you can draw her if you want

about the hand and feet,
I've put a rule on virtuna's guardians = no hand , no feet

if they have hand + feet = must be a weapon or clothes XD (just like via who have chain hand)

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I smile because i don't know what's going on

Shoes can be feet... or no?

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~LuzBalthasaar =PerseBalthasaar ~Serpentear
We are the Balthasaars! *Strange music plays*